Constructing a Personal Statement (Part 2)
This post shows my first and final draft of my personal statement. This is a document used when applying to University through UCAS and may also be required for apprenticeships and jobs. I used a class template and my own research to show me how to structure my personal statement and what information I should put in my paragraphs. I received feedback from a lecturer and improved my drafts. Here is my first draft Content creation and media has been my main passion since I was 10 years old.docx from ElliotDaroczy Lecturer Feedback Emma Leslie-Boddy Thank you Elliot for letting me have a read through your first draft, please see below for some pointers to enhance your statement. For your first paragraph, can you identify anyone that has particularly inspired you to pursue a career in this field? You should identify what your career aspirations are and why. In addition, you should mention what degree you are applying for. You have included your results for exams but this isn't ...